About the pain of sickness
학생이 쓴 원문
As for me, when I suffered from pain of sickness, I tried to have a positive mind for this.
The pain itself made me depressed and sad, so, I didn\'t want to admit this emotion. Because it also made me worse in terms of my sickness.
As a result, I got the positive mind and messages of others who cheered up me.
It was very helpful to be in remission.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It is vital to possess a positive outlook in life as it is one of the best medicines in the world.
Always keep a positive mind and things will just start to be better.
See you in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> As for me, when I suffer from pain of sickness, I try to have a positive mind for this.
>> Correct!
The pain itself made me depressed and sad, so, I didn\'t want to admit this emotion. Because it also made me worse in terms of my sickness.
>> Correct!
Or: The pain itself made me depressed and sad, so, I didn\'t want to admit this emotion because it also made me worse in terms of my sickness.
>> The pain itself made me depressed and sad, so, I didn\'t want to admit this emotion because it also made me worse in terms of my sickness.
As a result, I got the positive mind and messages of others who cheered up me.
>> As a result, I get the positive mindset and messages of others who cheer up me.
>> Correct!
It was very helpful to be in remission.
>> It is very helpful to be in remission.
>> Correct!
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