About the relationship.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher Sheila.
I don\'t agree that friendship is the most important relationship. Because most people want to have a relationship that people who related with me are helpful. So benefit is the more important t[이름] friendship about our relationship.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름] Ho! T[이름]k you for always taking the time to do your homework!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
I don\'t agree that friendship is the most important relationship.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I disagree that friendship is the most important relationship.
Because most people want to have a relationship that people who related with me are helpful.
>>Because most people want to have a relationship with people who are related that are helpful.
So benefit is the more important t[이름] friendship about our relationship.
>>So, benefit is more important t[이름] friendship in a relationship.
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