About the robots.
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think we can build real robots like in the movies in the future?
- Yes, of course, currently all of the world is changing.
maybe robots will replace all of the work humans in the future.
for examplr, auto car, robot house keeper. et cetera.
infact, no one predicted that a smartphone would come out just 20 years ago.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of building robots?
- advantage : Everything will change efficiently.
- disavantage: Robots have no emotion, so the world can be depressed.
Thank you teacher!
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Lucy
Yes, of course, currently all of the world is changing.
>>CORRECT!
maybe robots will replace all of the work humans in the future.
maybe robots will replace all of the work humans in the future.
>>Maybe robots will replace all of the human works in the future.
for examplr, auto car, robot house keeper. et cetera.
>>For example, auto car, robot house keeper and et cetera.
infact, no one predicted that a smartphone would come out just 20 years ago.
>>Infact, no one predicted that a smartphone would come out just 20 years ago.
advantage : Everything will change efficiently.
>>CORRECT!
- disavantage: Robots have no emotion, so the world can be depressed.
- disavantage: Robots have no emotion, so the world can be depressed.
>>CORRECT!
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