About the sleep..🧐
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. I once thought that sleep wasted precious time spent doing useful things. I wanted to play more with my friends, my brother, my relatives, but it was sad that I had to sleep. But if I hadn\'t slept then, my health would not have been good.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Yes. I once thought that sleep wasted precious time spent doing useful things.
>>> CORRECT!
I wanted to play more with my friends, my brother, my relatives, but it was sad that I had to sleep.
>>> I wanted to play more with my friends, brother, and my relatives, but it was sad that I had to sleep.
But if I hadn\'t slept then, my health would not have been good.
>>> CORRECT!
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