About the Thechnology.
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, technology is advancing, and people can live like robots in the advanced technology. With the development of the Internet, people can have conversations without having to meet in person, so I think I am more at home.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Well, technology is advancing, and people can live like robots in the advanced technology.
>>> Well, technology is advancing, and people can live like robots with advanced technology.
With the development of the Internet, people can have conversations without having to meet in person, so I think I am more at home.
>>> With the development of the internet, people can have conversations without having to meet in person, so I think I can stay at home often.
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