About the zombie village.

2022-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

학생이 쓴 원문

If I woke up one morning and all the villagers were zombies, I would run away. I will get as much food as I can and run away as far as I can. But if anyone in my family gets bitten, I will too. Because if my family is bitten, I don\'t want to abandon him or her and live alone.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


If I woke up one morning and all the villagers were zombies, I would run away.
>>> CORRECT!

I will get as much food as I can and run away as far as I can. 
>>> CORRECT!

But if anyone in my family gets bitten, I will too. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because if my family is bitten, I don\'t want to abandon him or her and live alone.
>>> CORRECT!

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