About today and my favorite sports^--^

2011-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

I played ski. It was very fun but also i'm very tired. I like basketball because I can enjoyed with ny friends and when I shoot the goal and it passed the goalset, I feel very excited and happy.^--^

강사 첨삭

Hello Sarah, Wow! You\'re fast in composing you letter. I want you to continue this and try to answer the homework I prepared. Here are my corrections. T.Sheela I played ski. >>Correct! It was very fun but also i\'m very tired. >>It was so much fun, but I was also very tired.I like basketball because I can enjoyed with ny friends and when I shoot the goal and it passed the goalset, I feel very excited and happy.^--^ >>I like basketball because I can enjoy playing with my friends. And when I shoot a ball and it went trought the basket, I feel very happy and excited.

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