About today and my favorite sports^--^
학생이 쓴 원문
I played ski.
It was very fun but also i'm very tired.
I like basketball because I can enjoyed with ny friends and when I shoot the goal and it passed the goalset, I feel very excited and happy.^--^
강사 첨삭
Hello Sarah,
Wow! You\'re fast in composing you letter. I want you to continue this and try to answer the homework I prepared.
Here are my corrections.
T.Sheela
I played ski.
>>Correct!
It was very fun but also i\'m very tired.
>>It was so much fun, but I was also very tired.I like basketball because I can enjoyed with ny friends and when I shoot the goal and it passed the goalset, I feel very excited and happy.^--^
>>I like basketball because I can enjoy playing with my friends. And when I shoot a ball and it went trought the basket, I feel very happy and excited.
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