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Dear [Name], Thanks for your one point lesson about my pronunciation. Specially, I know well my pronunciation is not good. I'll try to speech the your points continuously. Today much's pronunciation is [muh-ch] not [mu-ch]. When I heard my pronunciation by MP3 file one more time, I understood what is different. And, when I explained about the game I told you "Dancing Battle". But my pronunciation mignt be "Dancing Vattle", so you didn't hear me. I'll go to a ceremony of awarding prizes on 24th. The ceremony will be in Gumy. Anyway, Shy Thanks a lot for your points about my english status. Sincerely yours Youngduk [이름]

Hi Mr. [이름]!!   Chung Maneyo!!! Hehe!!     Well, I noticed that most of the time you add "-ee" at the end of words like "much-ee" instead of "much"... Try to eliminate the '-ee' ok?   About the Dancing Battle, we call it differently here so I was a bit confused, but when you told me how it is played I understood what you meant.. ^_^.. We call it Dance Revolution here in the Philippines, by the way.... ^^   Keep on practsing Sir and you will be great.. I believe in you..     xoxoxo, T. Shy ^^     Here are my corrections on your composition:   Thanks for your one point lesson about my pronunciation.>> Thanks for your lesson point about my pronunciation.   Specially, I know well my pronunciation is not good. >> I know well that my pronunciatin\on is not good. Specially is an adjective, you should use adverbs like "anyway" or "moreover"   I'll try to speech the your points continuously.>> I'll try to remember your lesson points continuously.   Today much's pronunciation is [muh-ch] not [mu-ch].>> Today much's pronunciation is [muh-ch] not [mu-chee]. CORRECT sentence though.. ^_^   When I heard my pronunciation by MP3 file one more time, I understood what is different.>> When I heard my pronunciation on the  MP3 file one more time, I understood what was different. (be consistent on the verb tenses... If you use past tense on the first part like "understood", "is" should be "was") And, when I explained about the game I told you "Dancing Battle".>> CORRECT   But my pronunciation mignt be "Dancing Vattle", so you didn't hear me.>> CORRECT   I'll go to a ceremony of awarding prizes on 24th. The ceremony will be in Gumy.>> I'll go to an awarding ceremony on the 24th. The ceremony will be in Gumy.   Anyway, Shy Thanks a lot for your points about my english status.>> Anyway, Shy thanks a lot for your pointers about my English status.