About travel which I was impressed
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Do you know the Sisyphus myth? When I visited in Greece 5~6 years ago, the guide in Corinth said to me that the relics of the Sisyphus is the bottom of Corinth. It's history is about 7,000~8,000 years ago. Corinth city was very flourishing around B.C. 200 years. The business in city was very active. Women priest were famous for a prostitute. But the city was collapsed by two earthquakes. The history of Corinth is about 2,200 years, the Sisyphus myth is the event of antiquity. It has not yet been proven historically. It was impressed to me. In nature scenery, I remembered Tasmania in Australia rather than the Alps and Himalayas. The Alps and Himalayas overwhelmed humans and seems to dominate the humans. Whereas the Tasmania seems to be familiar with humans. I'd like to go to places all over the world I have not visited in the future.
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Hi there [이름]!
I started reading Greek mythology in the 6th grade because some stories were included in our English books. I continued reading it through high school and college. They have so many wonderful and unbelievable stories so I like reading them even now.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Do you know the Sisyphus myth?
>> correct!
When I visited Greece 5~6 years ago, the guide in Corinth said to me that the relics of the Sisyphus is in the bottom of Corinth.
>> correct!
It\'s history is about 7,000~8,000 years ago.
>> It\'s history is about 7,000~8,000 years old.
Corinth city was very flourishing around B.C. 200 years.
>> Corinth city had flourished around 200 B.C.
The business in city was very active.
>> The business in the city was very active.
Women priest were famous for a prostitute.
>> Their priestesses were known to be prostitutes.
>>> Is prostitute the right word?
But the city was collapsed by two earthquakes.
>> But the city collapsed due to two earthquakes.
The history of Corinth is about 2,200 years, the Sisyphus myth is the event of antiquity.
>> The history of Corinth is about 2,200 years so the Sisyphus myth is an antique.
It has not yet been proven historically.
>> correct!
It was impressed to me.
>> It was impressive to me.
In nature scenery, I remembered Tasmania in Australia rather than the Alps and Himalayas.
>> I remember Tasmania in Australia rather than the Alps and Himalayas when it comes to beautiful scenery.
The Alps and Himalayas overwhelmed humans and seems to dominate the humans.
>> The Alps and Himalayas overwhelm humans and they seem to dominate the humans.
Whereas the Tasmania seems to be familiar with humans.
>> Whereas, Tasmania seems to be familiar to humans.
I\'d like to go to places all over the world I have not visited in the future.
>> I\'d like to go to places all over the world that I have not visited yet in the future.
I started reading Greek mythology in the 6th grade because some stories were included in our English books. I continued reading it through high school and college. They have so many wonderful and unbelievable stories so I like reading them even now.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Do you know the Sisyphus myth?
>> correct!
When I visited Greece 5~6 years ago, the guide in Corinth said to me that the relics of the Sisyphus is in the bottom of Corinth.
>> correct!
It\'s history is about 7,000~8,000 years ago.
>> It\'s history is about 7,000~8,000 years old.
Corinth city was very flourishing around B.C. 200 years.
>> Corinth city had flourished around 200 B.C.
The business in city was very active.
>> The business in the city was very active.
Women priest were famous for a prostitute.
>> Their priestesses were known to be prostitutes.
>>> Is prostitute the right word?
But the city was collapsed by two earthquakes.
>> But the city collapsed due to two earthquakes.
The history of Corinth is about 2,200 years, the Sisyphus myth is the event of antiquity.
>> The history of Corinth is about 2,200 years so the Sisyphus myth is an antique.
It has not yet been proven historically.
>> correct!
It was impressed to me.
>> It was impressive to me.
In nature scenery, I remembered Tasmania in Australia rather than the Alps and Himalayas.
>> I remember Tasmania in Australia rather than the Alps and Himalayas when it comes to beautiful scenery.
The Alps and Himalayas overwhelmed humans and seems to dominate the humans.
>> The Alps and Himalayas overwhelm humans and they seem to dominate the humans.
Whereas the Tasmania seems to be familiar with humans.
>> Whereas, Tasmania seems to be familiar to humans.
I\'d like to go to places all over the world I have not visited in the future.
>> I\'d like to go to places all over the world that I have not visited yet in the future.
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