About trip in china
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i have been there a lot.
i have been there by alone or i have been there with my family sometimes.i have been there at least 12times 1 year.almost 1time 1month.
We had been there without my third baby.because of she was not born.and she doesn\'t have lots of family\'s photos.
Usually i go there for my business.there is a employee who work for me.he is chinese and he can speak english.we talk by english.but sometimes i used be feel that my english is not enough.
We always use gwang zhou airport.it takes from korea to there at least 3 and half minutes. When i visit there first time i think too long.but not now.
If it does not special happen,We always arrive at the airport at the lunch time.then we go to the korea restaurant in korea town,gwang zhou.
We think the restaurant food is delicious than original korea food.i used tell my employee this cooker skill is very good.
Nomally i stay there for a short time.3 days or 4 days.
Thank you.
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing.
-T. Gabby :)
i have been there a lot.
>> I have been there many times.
i have been there by alone or i have been there with my family sometimes.
i have been there by alone or i have been there with my family sometimes.
>> I went in China alone and sometimes with my family.
i have been there at least 12times 1 year.almost 1time 1month.
>> I went there before every month, 12 times in a year.
We had been there without my third baby.because of she was not born.and she doesn\'t have lots of family\'s photos.
We had been there without my third baby.because of she was not born.and she doesn\'t have lots of family\'s photos.
>> We went there without my third baby because she was not born yet so she doesn\'t have a lot of family photos yet.
Usually i go there for my business.there is a employee who work for me.
Usually i go there for my business.there is a employee who work for me.
>> I usually go there for business. There is an employee who works for me.
he is chinese and he can speak english.we talk by english.but sometimes i used be feel that my english is not enough.
>> He is chinese and he can speak English. We talk in English but sometimes I used be feel that my English is not enough.
We always use gwang zhou airport.it takes from Korea to there at least 3 and half minutes.
We always use gwang zhou airport.it takes from Korea to there at least 3 and half minutes.
>> We always use gwang zhou airport. It takes at least 3 and half minutes to arrive there from Korea.
When i visit there first time i think too long.but not now.
>> When i visit there for the first time I thought that it\'s too long but not now.
If it does not special happen,
If it does not special happen,
>> If it\'s not so special.
We always arrive at the airport at the lunch time.then we go to the korea restaurant in korea town,gwang zhou.
>> We usually arrive at the airport during lunch time then we go to a korean restaurant named gwang zhou.
We think the restaurant food is delicious than original korea food.
We think the restaurant food is delicious than original korea food.
>> We think that the restaurant\'s food is delicious more than the original korean food.
i used tell my employee this cooker skill is very good.
>> I used to tell my employee that this cooker\'s skill is very good.
Nomally i stay there for a short time.3 days or 4 days.
Nomally i stay there for a short time.3 days or 4 days.
>> I normally stay there for 3 -4 days.
Thank you.
Thank you.
>> Correct.
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