About winter fashion
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I often enjoy winter fashion, but I usually feel uncomfortable. There are a lot of thick clothes, so it\'s uncomfortable to move and often feel stuffy. And there are also inconveniences such as not fitting well because it is bulky when storing something like a coat in a bag for a while.
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I often enjoy winter fashion, but I usually feel uncomfortable.
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There are a lot of thick clothes, so it\'s uncomfortable to move and often feel stuffy.
>> There are a lot of thick clothes, so it’s hard to move and often feels stuffy.
And there are also inconveniences such as not fitting well because it is bulky when storing something like a coat in a bag for a while.
>> There are also inconveniences, such as coats not fitting well in a bag because they are bulky.
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