about wire tap..2

But if somebody who wants to steal the major imformation about the scientific skills and sell them,,so if this is the reason he tries to wire tap.. it is exactly wrong. anyway personally.. whenever I think someone is wiring tap on me, I am so scared. of course I am not guilty and didn't do anything wrong.. I have personal life I wanna keep secret..

Hi Doris! You did well in this composition. J I hope the corrections help. Generally I think wire tapping is a bad thing since your going into the  private lives of other people. J -Teacher Verna- But if somebody who wants to steal the major imformation about the scientific skills and sell them,,so if this is the reason he tries to wire tap.. it is exactly wrong.>> But if somebody wants to steal major information about scientific skills and then sell them, this is an invalid reason to wire tap.anyway personally.. whenever I think someone is wiring tap on me, I am so scared. of course I am not guilty and didn't do anything wrong.. >> Anyway, whenever I think that someone is wire tapping on me, I feel so scared.  Of course I am not guilty and didn't do anything wrong.I have personal life I wanna keep secret.. >> I have a personal life and I want to keep my secrets.