about writting in english

2012-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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i am supposed to write down something in english about any topoc whenever i have a time to spare. the text might be a dairy, a parase, a sentence, a simple essay or a proverb and so on. I think that act helps me improve english skill. When i will live in america, not only speaking and listening skill but writting skill is important. As many korean students are, i'm accostomed with listening and reading but bad at speaking and writting. i've studied speaking using english phone calling every 10 minutes. So the rest is writting. Writting english like this is also funny. Not only is there no reason to study wirtting skill but also i should do so that live in america succesfully.

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear, I really admire you because you are not just good in speaking but you are also good at writing. You were able to express your ideas about a certain topic and that is a good job! Keep up the good work my dear and Im always here to help you.. Take care always and good night.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ i am supposed to write down something in english about any topoc whenever i have a time to spare. >>correct the text might be a dairy, a parase, a sentence, a simple essay or a proverb and so on. >>correct..phrase I think that act helps me improve english skill. >>correct When i will live in america, not only speaking and listening skill but writting skill is important. >>correct As many korean students are, i\'m accostomed with listening and reading but bad at speaking and writting. >>correct i\'ve studied speaking using english phone calling every 10 minutes. >>Ive studied speaking using english phone slass for 10 minutes. So the rest is writting. >>correct Writting english like this is also funny. >>correct Not only is there no reason to study wirtting skill but also i should do so that live in america succesfully. >>Maybe tHere is no reason for me to study writing but I must do this inorder for me to survive in America.

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