About Yesan
학생이 쓴 원문
Yesan is a small town in Chung Chung Nam Do. It takes 2hours by the car from Seoul.
Main industry in Yesan is a farming industry, especially apple is famous of being delicious.
Because there are little factories and big companies, many young people went to cities to get a job which are easy. So the average population is old people. I love Yesan because there are a lot of trees and mountains. Every spring I can see beautiful Cherry blossom everywhere. I super love it. Yesan had a fresh air before. But now there are a lot of fine dust from China so we can\'t see a blue clear sky. It makes me sad.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], great work here, keep it up, okay! Nice meeting you again and see you again tomorrow! Take care always! =)
~~ T. Ali =)
Yesan is a small town in Chung Chung Nam Do. >> Correct
It takes 2 hours by the car from Seoul.
>> Correct
Main industry in Yesan is a farming industry, especially apple is famous of being delicious.
Main industry in Yesan is a farming industry, especially apple is famous of being delicious.
>> The main industry in Yesan is arming industry; especially apples are famous for being delicious here.
Because there are little factories and big companies, many young people went to cities to get a job which are easy.
>> Correct
So the average population is old people.
>> Correct
I love Yesan because there are a lot of trees and mountains.
>> Correct
Every spring I can see beautiful Cherry blossom everywhere. I super love it.
>> Correct, just say Cherry Blossoms
Yesan had a fresh air before. But now there are a lot of fine dust from China so we can\'t see a blue clear sky. It makes me sad.
>> Correct
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