about yesterday's story

Hi Louis!

Thank you for clearing the story out. ^^

I hope you feel better.

Don\'t let the mean words of your boss get to you okay?

You are a great employee and he is only saying those things because he\'s stressed.

Here are some corrections to the composition you sent. ^^

~~t. Ally

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Dear Alley,

>> CORRECT!

 About what my boss tole me yesterday, I think I have not explained to you correctly.

>> About what my boss told me yesterday, I don\'t think I was able to explain it well.

 I mean my boss tole me that he only gave me one thirds of work which he assigned for my predessor( I was a replacement for my predessor and she left, what do you call it?)

>> What I meant to say was that my boss told me he only gave me a third of the workload that he assigned to my predecessor. I was the replacement for my predecessor when she resigned/ retired.

 And he said to me \" What is your problem\"

>> He asked me what my problem was.

 That\'s why I felt horrible yesterday.

>> CORRECT!

 But as your advise, I will not talk back to him not to get fired.

>> But as you advised, I will not talk back to him so as not to get fired.

 Thank you.

>> CORRECT!

 Have a great day!

>> CORRECT!

 Louis

>> CORRECT!