about your best choice for the Covid Vaccine and why you think it is the best.

2021-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 ali

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I think that Pfizer vaccine is the best among the Covid-19 vaccine. Because the antibody production rate is high, it is up to 95%. Comparative to it, antibody production rate of AZ vaccine is only 80%. And Pfizer vaccine have less adverse effects than AZ vaccine.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this very useful information, Dr, Alice, I shall take note of it if I have the chance to shoose from among the vaccines. 
Take care always and see you later in class. =)
~~ T. Ali =)
I think that Pfizer vaccine is the best among the Covid-19 vaccine.
>> I think that Pfizer vaccine is the best among the Covid-19 vaccines.
Because the antibody production rate is high, it is up to 95%. 
>> Correct
Comparative to it, antibody production rate of AZ vaccine is only 80%.
>> Correct
And Pfizer vaccine have less adverse effects than AZ vaccine.
>> Correct

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