Absene of my class last friday
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1. Hello Ma'am. I am sorry I could not attend my class today.
Becuase my grand father passed away toady. He is 92 years old
and He was farmer in live time. He was very deligient
Any way
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Hey there, [이름]!:)
How are you doing?
I am so sorry to hear about your grandfather.
I am extending my deepest condolence to you.
Thank you for sending me a message about the reason of your absence today.
I really appreciate it..
I\'ll talk to you on Monday! :)
~ T. Lorna^-^
Hello Ma\'am
>> Hello Ma\'am Lorna,
I am sorry I could not attend my class today.Becuase my grand father passed away toady.
>> I am sorry that I couldn\'t attend my class today because my grandfather passed away.
He is 92 years old and He was farmer in live time.
He is 92 years old and He was farmer in live time.
>> He is 92 years old and he lived as a farmer.
He was very deligient Any way
>> He was a very diligent man.
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