Absent

2017-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Lorna

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1. Hello Ma'am Lorna. I absent the class of free talking last friday. I slept at that time because of tired and I had hard work today. I am sorry that I did not attend class. I will not absent the class this day forward.

강사 첨삭

Hey there, [이름]!^^
Happy happy Monday to you!
How are you doing? Did you have a great weekend?
Oh, it\'s fine and it\'s no problem for me.
I understand that it\'s Friday so you are probably exhausted for the whole weeks\' work.
However, i will be happy also when you will attend your class :).

~ T. Lorna^^

1. Hello Ma\'am Lorna.
>> Hello, Ma\'am Lorna.
I absent the class of free talking last friday. I slept at that time
>> I was absent during our class last Friday because I was asleep.
because of tired and I had hard work today.
>> I had a hard work that day so I was so tired.
I am sorry that I did not attend class.
>> I am so sorry if I didn\'t attend our class.
I will not absent the class this day forward.
>> I will try not to be absent for our our next classes.

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