absent today

2012-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hi marie? I'm sorry I was slept deeply Yesterday, I went to my university and went to movie 'looper' maybe I was so tired. I dreamt in today morning. In my dream, I heard my ring.. but I ignored my bell..... in dream. maybe I don't want to break my dream.. ㅠㅠ anyway, I'm so sorry Marie Today, I will go to library nearby I will read a book!!!! So, see you tomorrow! Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for letting me know what happened to you this morning. I appreciate it.  That\'s fine. We can just talk tomorrow. You have to tell me about that movie okay?  I checked some of your sentences here, please review them. Have a wonderful Wednesday! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ Hi marie? >> Hi Marie!I\'m sorry I was slept deeply >> I\'m sorry, I slept too deeply.Yesterday, I went to my university and went to movie \'looper\' >> Yesterday I went to my university and then I went to see the movie \'Looper\'.maybe I was so tired. >> CORRECT OR >> I guess I was so tired.I dreamt in today morning. >> I was dreaming this morning.In my dream, I heard my ring.. but I ignored my bell..... in dream. >> In my dream I could hear my phone ringing, but I just ignored it.maybe I don\'t want to break my dream.. ㅠㅠ >> Maybe I didn\'t want to wake up from my dream.anyway, I\'m so sorry Marie>> CORRECT *Capitalize: anyway - AnywayToday, I will go to library nearby >> Today I\'m going to a library nearby.I will read a book!!!! >> CORRECTSo, see you tomorrow! >> CORRECT Thank you! >> CORRECT

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