absent today
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi marie?
I'm sorry I was slept deeply
Yesterday, I went to my university and went to movie 'looper'
maybe I was so tired.
I dreamt in today morning.
In my dream, I heard my ring.. but I ignored my bell..... in dream.
maybe I don't want to break my dream.. ㅠㅠ
anyway, I'm so sorry Marie
Today, I will go to library nearby
I will read a book!!!!
So, see you tomorrow! Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for letting me know what happened to you this morning. I appreciate it. That\'s fine. We can just talk tomorrow. You have to tell me about that movie okay? I checked some of your sentences here, please review them. Have a wonderful Wednesday! CIAO!
~Teacher Marie~
Hi marie?
>> Hi Marie!I\'m sorry I was slept deeply
>> I\'m sorry, I slept too deeply.Yesterday, I went to my university and went to movie \'looper\'
>> Yesterday I went to my university and then I went to see the movie \'Looper\'.maybe I was so tired.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I guess I was so tired.I dreamt in today morning.
>> I was dreaming this morning.In my dream, I heard my ring.. but I ignored my bell..... in dream.
>> In my dream I could hear my phone ringing, but I just ignored it.maybe I don\'t want to break my dream.. ㅠㅠ
>> Maybe I didn\'t want to wake up from my dream.anyway, I\'m so sorry Marie>> CORRECT
*Capitalize: anyway - AnywayToday, I will go to library nearby
>> Today I\'m going to a library nearby.I will read a book!!!!
>> CORRECTSo, see you tomorrow!
>> CORRECT
Thank you!
>> CORRECT
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