Absolutely I feel indigestion
학생이 쓴 원문
But why am I eating as much as like this?
I can't control of what I eat.
I really want to study only one deeply and perfectly no matter what it may be English or my major.
I wish the speed of time to study would be as fast as the one of time to use Internet.
I'm afraid that I miss both.
Those make me stressful and eat a lot.
Compared to how long I am in the library, the amount of studying is awful.
After what all I have to do that day, it's usually at midnight.
I'm annoyed that I have to go to the library after 8 hours.
Oh, my God. Please let me sleep deeply.
Although I don't believe in any religions, I hope God's existence who hear what I want.
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Hi [이름]!
I hope I can as much as you do!
I am missing a lot of meals nowadays because of stress.
How ironic can we get?
Stay positive, time has passed, efforts has been spent so you need to stay focus whatever it takes.
Fighting!
-Tiny^0^
But why am I eating as much as like this?
>>correctI can't control of what I eat.
>>I can’t control what I eat.I really want to study only one deeply and perfectly no matter what it may be English or my major.
>> I really want to study just once deeply and perfectly, may it be English or my major.
I wish the speed of time to study would be as fast as the one of time to use Internet.
>> I wish the speed of time to study would be as fast as the way we use Internet.
I'm afraid that I miss both.
>> I'm afraid that might I miss both.
Those make me stressful and eat a lot.
>>correct kk^^Compared to how long I am in the library, the amount of studying is awful.>>The amount of studying is awful compared to how long I am in the library. (better)
After what all I have to do that day, it's usually at midnight.
>>Do you mean: I usually finishes all I have to do in a day at midnight.I'm annoyed that I have to go to the library after 8 hours.
>> I'm annoyed that I have to go to the library for eight hours.
Oh, my God. Please let me sleep deeply.
>> Oh, my God! Please let me sleep deeply.Although I don't believe in any religions, I hope God's existence who hear what I want.
>> Although I don't believe in any religions, I hope God exists and hears what I need.
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