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The purpose of this study is to examine what the unique spiritual world of Koreans is and what kind of subjective thoughts Koreans have formed.

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In order to do this, I focused on the Hanul(天) thought of Donghak(東學).

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The philosophy of Donghak has been reinterpreted and developed over and over again.

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Suwun Choi Je-woo expressed the oneness of human and all in the truth of going back and creation and destruction.

>>Suwun Choi Je-woo expressed the oneness of human and all in the truth of going back, creation and destruction.

 Also Haewol Choi Shi-hyung said that everything is a diverse expression of whole Universe.

>> Also Haewol Choi Shi-hyung said that everything is a diverse expression of whole yniverse.

It was named \"Ilimansu(一理萬殊)\" by him.

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 And Ilimansu means a variety of space sources.

>>It was named \"Ilimansu(一理萬殊)\" by him, and Ilimansu means a variety of space sources.

 If Suwun emphasized that all things are heaven, Haewol expressed the concrete activities and development of Hanul(天).

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Yiam Son Byeong-hee also speaked Hanul as a active Sunya and emphasized Hanul\'s activities of whole universe that is a human mind.

>>Yiam Son Byeong-hee also speaked Hanul as an active Sunya and emphasized Hanul\'s activities of whole universe that is the human mind.