abuse
학생이 쓴 원문
It is hopeless that many kids are abused and killes by their parent and relatives.
But perhaps it is advnced aspect that government investigate in detail the situation of child abuse.
I believe the parents should be phsically and mentally heanthy for their raising their children.
It is impossible to raise their children good in the extream poverty and depression.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Ms. [이름].
Not all people have parental ability. People like them are worse than animals because an animal can love and protect its offspring but why can\'t humans? I don\'t understand. I agree with you that parents must be physically and mentally ready.
See you!
Aki~
It is hopeless that many kids are abused and killes by their parent and relatives.
>>> It is hopeless that many kids are abused and killed by their parents and relatives.
But perhaps it is advnced aspect that government investigate in detail the situation of child abuse.
>>> But perhaps it is an advanced aspect that the government investigates in detail the situation of child abuse.
I believe the parents should be phsically and mentally heanthy for their raising their children.
>>> I believe the parents should be physically and mentally healthy for their raising their children.
It is impossible to raise their children good in the extream poverty and depression.
>>> It is impossible to raise their children well in extreme poverty and depression.
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