Abut true beauty.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I didn\'t know that I was getting older.
But I know that now.
I think it is a beautiful life to accept all the changes that come to me naturally.
I want to be grandmother who welcomes wrinkles.
강사 첨삭
Hurray it\'s Monday, Ms. [Name]!
Yes, acceptance would help us become happier in life. Thank you for your wonderful composition.
Ciao~
~Teacher Eunice
When I was young, I didn\'t know that I was getting older.
>>> When I was young, I didn\'t know that I will get older.
But I know that now.
>>> Correct!
I think it is a beautiful life to accept all the changes that come to me naturally.
>>> Correct!
I want to be grandmother who welcomes wrinkles.
>>> I want to be a grandmother who welcomes wrinkles.
>>> OR: I want to be a grandmother who embraces wrinkles and other signs of aging.
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