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2014-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

I went to my academy today. It is so boring at me. I can't play there. I can't speak there. I must take homework. Example, when i do not take home work. I have tribble. I will be very tired. v┏√守───━┏√守───━vv Good Bye~!~@~!#@#┏√守───━

강사 첨삭

You are right Mike! Yes, you must do your homework. It is alright when you cannot play and speak too much in your academy because you go there to study. So, when you are in your academy, stay focused and be attentive. Be a responsible student. Okay? Anyway, enjoy the rest of your evening. I will call you again tomorrow. Have a calm and sweet night! -Teacher Chloe I went to my academy today. >>Correct!It is so boring at me. >>It was so boring. >>I was so bored.  I can\'t play there. >>I couldn\'t play there. I can\'t speak there. >>I couldn\'t even speak there.I must take homework. >>I must do my homework. Example, when i do not take home work. I have tribble. >>When I don\'t do my homework, it is terrible. I will be very tired. >>Correct!

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