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2014-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

I go academy yesterday. It was so bad. I am not good at test. But i must take test. It's was very bad. But i must take test. My sister and i go same academy. I get out of the academy fast. Because My sister was sick. Have a nice day~~~ GOOD BYE~~ʘɮЙЩ

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

A festive Monday to you!

Thank you for posting your composition once again.

You did well but be more careful with your grammar.

If you are talking about the things or actions that happened in the past then you should use the past form of verbs.

Kindly go over the corrections below.

See you in class.

~~T. Chloe

I go academy yesterday.

>>I went to the academy yesterday.
It was so bad.

>>Correct!

>>It didn\'t go well.
I am not good at test.

>> I\'m not good at answering tests.

But i must take test.

>>But I must take them.
It\'s was very bad. But i must take test.

>>It was very bad but I must take the tests.
My sister and i go same academy.
>>My sister and I go to the same academy.
I get out of the academy fast. BecauseMy sister was sick.
>>I left the academy fast because my sister was sick.

Have a nice day~~~
>>Correct!^^

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