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I went to academy today.
After academy I ate something.
It was chicken bar.
It was very delicious.
My friend liked it.
It was very good.
He liked it, I liked it too.
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강사 첨삭
So, I believe that you were very full.
Wow! I want to eat fried chicken now.
You just made me feel hungry.
Good to know that you liked it.
Anyway, have a good night Mike!
Take a rest now.
I will call you again tomorrow.
Good night!
Sweet dreams!
Sleep tight dear.
-Teacher Chloe
I went to academy today.
>>Correct! After academy I ate something. It was chicken bar.
>>After academy, we had snack in \"Chicken Bar\".
>>After academy, I ate chicken.It was very delicious.
>>Correct! My friend liked it.
>>Correct! It was very good.
>>Correct! He liked it, I liked it too.
>>Correct!
>>We liked it.GoOdbYE
>>Goobye!
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