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2014-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I went to academy today. After academy I ate something. It was chicken bar. It was very delicious. My friend liked it. It was very good. He liked it, I liked it too. G o O d b Y E

강사 첨삭

So, I believe that you were very full. Wow! I want to eat fried chicken now. You just made me feel hungry. Good to know that you liked it. Anyway, have a good night Mike! Take a rest now. I will call you again tomorrow. Good night! Sweet dreams! Sleep tight dear. -Teacher Chloe I went to academy today. >>Correct! After academy I ate something. It was chicken bar. >>After academy, we had snack in \"Chicken Bar\". >>After academy, I ate chicken.It was very delicious. >>Correct! My friend liked it. >>Correct! It was very good. >>Correct! He liked it, I liked it too. >>Correct! >>We liked it.GoOdbYE >>Goobye!

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