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2014-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I went to my academy. My sister went to academy late. And then I called to my mom. I'm surprise. Because she is not called my mom. She doen't have reason. It is very bad. I want to she will be good for time. G o o d b y e

강사 첨삭

Oh, you are such a very caring brother. I think you were really worried about your sister that you even called your mother. I know that you really care Mike. Love your family unconditionally. Have a good night! Sleep tight! -Teacher Chloe I went to my academy. >>Correct! >>I went to academy today.My sister went to academy late. >>Correct!And then I called to my mom. >>I called to my mother. >>I called to my mom. I\'m surprise. >>I was surprised. Because she is not called my mom. >>She didn\'t call our mother. She doen\'t have reason. >>She did not have a reason.It is very bad. >>Correct!I want to she will be good for time. >>I want her to be good next time. Goodbye >>Goodbye!

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