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I went to my academy.
My sister went to academy late.
And then I called to my mom.
I'm surprise.
Because she is not called my mom.
She doen't have reason.
It is very bad.
I want to she will be good for time.
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강사 첨삭
Oh, you are such a very caring brother.
I think you were really worried about your sister that you even called your mother.
I know that you really care Mike.
Love your family unconditionally.
Have a good night!
Sleep tight!
-Teacher Chloe
I went to my academy.
>>Correct!
>>I went to academy today.My sister went to academy late.
>>Correct!And then I called to my mom.
>>I called to my mother.
>>I called to my mom. I\'m surprise.
>>I was surprised. Because she is not called my mom.
>>She didn\'t call our mother. She doen\'t have reason.
>>She did not have a reason.It is very bad.
>>Correct!I want to she will be good for time.
>>I want her to be good next time. Goodbye
>>Goodbye!
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