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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello My teacher ChlOE
I also went to academy.
It was so bad.
It was not good.
Because of home work.
Home work so hard and too much.
So I do not my homework.
Go
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강사 첨삭
Oh Mike!
I have told you that you need to be a responsible student.
When you have homework, you need to do them.
Whether they are difficult or not, take time to do them.
Again, be responsible enough.
Be sure you will finish all of your homework for tomorrow.
Good night dear.
-Teacher Chloe
Hello My teacher ChlOE
>>Hello my teacher Chloe! I also went to academy.
>>I went to academy today.It was so bad.
>>Correct!It was not good. Because of home work.
>>It was not good because of my homework. Home work so hard and too much.
>>It was so hard. So I do not my homework.
>>So, I did not do it.
>>So, I did not do my homework. Goodbye
>>Goodbye!
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