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Happy new year !! My children`s the academy winter vacation. The vacation period starts on December 29 to January 4. They will to academy next week on Monday. They have free time. So last Wednesday at night my family went to the theater . My children love watching movies. I watched a movies the entitled Internarnational makrt with my family. Nowadays, it is the most popular movie. My children ate a lot of popcorn and some drinks. They wanted the large size the movie earned more than 54 percent. It getting more popular. It a form of relaxtion as well as a great way to spend time with the members of my family. Goodbye~^^

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! I\'m happy to know that you had a wonderful time with your family. I hope you can do so from time to time. Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ Happy new year !!>> Correct My children`s the academy winter vacation.>> My children are taking winter break from the academy.  The vacation period starts on December 29 to January 4.>> Correct They will to academy next week on Monday.>> Correct They have free time.>> Correct So last Wednesday at night my family went to the theater .>> So last Wednesday night, my family went to a theater.  My children love watching movies.>> Correct I watched a movies the entitled Internarnational makrt with my family.>> I watched a movie entitled \"International Market\" with my family.  Nowadays, it is the most popular movie.>> Correct My children ate a lot of popcorn and some drinks.>> Correct They wanted the large size the movie earned more than 54 percent.>> They wanted the large size. The movie earned more than 54 percent.  It getting more popular.>> It\'s getting more popular.  It a form of relaxtion as well as a great way to spend time with the members of my family.>> It\'s a good form of relaxation as well as a great way to spend time with family. Goodbye~^^ >> Correct