accident
학생이 쓴 원문
We should overcome or remove safety insensibility.
Nobody consider that we might be encounter several kinds accident by change or by unfortunate luck.
Government and companies always announce policies that are too hasty and ineffective like desk worker.
As a result the number new documents are increasing to check up safety to avoid responsibility each other.
We need safety awareness for us.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]!
I agree with you. Government policies should be tried and tested by the bill maker and should check their effect. Some policies do not trigger even a threat to company owners, so most are ignored or not implemented. I hope this issue will be solved soon, and try to create a more effective means that will protect workers.
See you!
Aki~
We should overcome or remove safety insensibility.
>> CORRECT!
Nobody consider that we might be encounter several kinds accident by change or by unfortunate luck.
>> Nobody considers that we might encounter several kinds of accidents by chance or by unfortunate luck.
Government and companies always announce policies that are too hasty and ineffective like desk worker.
>> Government and companies always announce policies that are too hasty and ineffective, like a desk worker.
As a result the number new documents are increasing to check up safety to avoid responsibility each other.
>> As a result, the number of new documents is increasing to ensure safety and avoid mutual responsibility.
We need safety awareness for us.
>> We need safety awareness for ourselves
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