accident

after shitting, i went out my home. i saw coming bus over there on the way to take bus. so i gave up to take the bus and i came back home. i bring my car key and drive my own car

Hi Soo Jin! I'm so glad that you sent me your composition. You have to be careful in driving to avoid accidents okay? Keep safe! (^_^) --Jessica-- accident >> An Accident (You have to start a sentence or a word (if it's the title) with a capital letter) after shitting, i went out my home. >> I went back home after my shift already. (You have to start a sentence or a word with a capital letter) i saw coming bus over there on the way to take bus. > > I saw a bus coming over so I ride on it. (You have to start a sentence or a word with a capital letter) so i gave up to take the bus and i came back home. >> So I took a bus in going back home but from home, I decided to get my car key and drive my own car. (You have to start a sentence or a word with a capital letter) i bring my car key and drive my own car >> So, I got my car key and drive by myself again. (You have to start a sentence or a word with a capital letter)