Accreditation

This story is not astonishing but the actors made a realistic performance with their talents. I felt what the actors felts and understood their behaviors. I would like to recommand this movie to pepople that find emotional, thought-provoking and realistic drama. But you can be disappointed if you like edge of you seat chill. The scool that want to get an accreditation have to overtake self-diagnosis refering school evaluation manual that private school commission provide with. With this manual, school can evaluate before assessment. Such a self-inspectation can be used as a tool for development of school and more valuable than accreditation procedure if it overtakes well. It is necessary that when comission comes to evaluate the school, they can be observed in step of assessment procedure.

Hi there,             Thank you so much for doing your homework. i made some corrections for you. If you wish to ask something please feel free to do that in our class. See you! -T. Michelle- This story is not astonishing but the actors made realistic performance with their talents. >>Correct I felt what the actors felts and understood their behaviors. >> I felt that the actors internalized and understood their behaviors. I would like to recommand this movie to pepople that find emotional, thought-provoking and realistic drama. >> I would like to recommend this movie to people that are looking for emotional, thought-provoking and realistic drama. But you can be disappointed if you like edge of you seat chill. >> But you can be disappointed if you like be at the end of your seat and chill. The scool that want to get an accreditation have to overtake self-diagnosis refering school evaluation manual that private school commission provide with. >> The school that wants to get an accreditation have to overtake self-diagnosis referring to school evaluation manual that private school commission provides. With this manual, school can evaluate before assessment. >>Correct Such a self-inspectation can be used as a tool for development of school and more valuable than accreditation procedure if it overtakes well. >> Such a self-inspection can be used as a tool for development of school and it is more valuable than accreditation procedure if it is conducted  well. It is necessary that when comission comes to evaluate the school, they can be observed in step of assessment procedure. >> It is necessary that when commission comes to evaluate the school, they can be observed the assessment procedure.