Acheve a goal
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Recently, my goal was a loose a weight.
My plan was reach to the 48kg untll 8/31. (since 7/1)
it was very very hard times to me.
because I love eating something So, i can\\\'t do power up and not interesting every thing.
on 8/20 morning before fiona\'s class I checked my weight, it wad 48.9kg
I\'m very happy and pleasure . it is going to reach my goal.
but, after that day, my tense is come loose. i ate too much and doesnt try to hard.
now a days, I returned before my weight omg
So, i will try to hard this month !!!!!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Maybe because you are too anxious about your work.
Take it easy and do some meditation :)
Recently, my goal was a loose a weight.
>>> Recently, my goal was to lose weight.
My plan was reach to the 48kg untll 8/31. (since 7/1)
>>> My plan was to reach 48kg by 8/31.
it was very very hard times to me.
>>> It\'s been a really tough time for me.
because I love eating something So, i can\\\'t do power up and not interesting every thing.
>>> I like to eat, so I can\'t power up and it\'s not fun.
on 8/20 morning before fiona\'s class I checked my weight, it wad 48.9kg
>>> I checked my weight on August 20th before class and I\'m 48.9kg.
I\'m very happy and pleasure .
>>> I\'m very happy and pleased.
it is going to reach my goal.
>>> I\'m going to reach my goal.
but, after that day, my tense is come loose.
>>> After a that day, I\'m becoming tense.
i ate too much and doesnt try to hard.
>>> I ate too much and I don\'t try harder.
now a days, I returned before my weight omg
>>> Now my weight I\'m back to my original weight.
So, i will try to hard this month !!!!!
>>> So I will try harder this month.
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