Action of no reply
학생이 쓴 원문
When she never answers, I quit waiting her answers. She did not answer when she read my message So I blocked her sns and mobile phone number. Than I felt better. I hope her to know I blocked her.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Thomas!
I respect and admire your courage to do this. If I were you, I would do the same. First, we need to try. If we get repudiated, we have to move on and find someone who we can spend a happy life with. I am glad you tried but I am happier that you made up your mind and blocked your source of pain.
So how is your heart nowadays? Tell me soon.
Study carefully my grammar suggestions for correct pronunciation, capitalization, and syntax. Great job!
I will catch you in class tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
>> When she never answers, I quit waiting for her answers.
She did not answer when she read my message
>> Correct!
Or: She did not answer when she read my message.
So I blocked her sns and mobile phone number.
>> Correct!
Or: So I blocked her SNS and mobile phone number.
Or: So I blocked her SNS and mobile phone number.
Than I felt better. I hope her to know I blocked her.
>> ... I hope that she will know that I blocked her.
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