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I like hiking. I have been climb the mountain since I was 18years old.
Sometimes when I am not busy, I take a walk with my dogs in our village. I also having a barbecue party with my family in our yard especially on the weekends.
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Hello Annie,
Happy Friday! Thank you for sharing the activities that you enjoy.
Enjoy the weekend!
T. Aki~
I like hiking. I have been climb the mountain since I was 18 years old.
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Sometimes when I am not busy, I take a walk with my dogs in our village.
Sometimes when I am not busy, I take a walk with my dogs in our village.
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OR >>> I sometimes walk my dogs in our village when I am not busy.
I also having a barbecue party with my family in our yard especially on the weekends.
>>> I am also having a barbecue party with my family in our yard especially on the weekends
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