activities enjoying with my friends
학생이 쓴 원문
What activities do you enjoy with your friends?
I enjoy singing in a singing room with my friends. We like singing so we sang 4 hours at the past. But it\'s hard to go to the singing room because of COVID19. I wish we can sing together. I enjoy eating delicious food, watching movies, and traveling with my friends. When we travel to new places, we search the restaurant that is famous for serving delicious foods. I want to meet my friends and travel the whole country, eat delicious foods, and take photos with together.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your answer to the question I sent.
I really hope that you will be able to travel with your friends and enjoy the things you like doing.
I also hope that I would be able to do it with my friends as well. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
We like singing so we sang 4 hours at the past.
>> We like singing so we sang for 4 hours in the past.
But it\'s hard to go to the singing room because of COVID19.
>> CORRECT.
I wish we can sing together.
>> CORRECT.
I enjoy eating delicious food, watching movies, and traveling with my friends.
>> CORRECT.
When we travel to new places, we search the restaurant that is famous for serving delicious foods.
>> When we travel to new places, we search the restaurant that is famous for serving delicious food.
I want to meet my friends and travel the whole country, eat delicious foods, and take photos with together.
>> I want to meet my friends and travel the whole country, eat delicious food, and take photos together.
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