Activities in Bohol
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I want to go to Chocolate Hills and Bali casa Island. I heard that the two places were designated as World Natural Heritage sites because of unique natural scenery and biodiversity. I am looking forward to seeing beautiful sunset in Chocolate Hills. Of course, I want to enjoy under water activities like snorkeling. I\'m looking forward to seeing the beautiful sea but I am worried about my poor swimming skills.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I really hope you can visit soon. I hope Bohol meets your expectations, if not exceeds them.
- T. Caitlyn
I want to go to Chocolate Hills and Bali casa Island.
>> I want to go to Chocolate Hills and Balicasag Island.
I heard that the two places were designated as World Natural Heritage sites because of unique natural scenery and biodiversity.
>> CORRECT
I am looking forward to seeing beautiful sunset in Chocolate Hills.
>> CORRECT
Of course, I want to enjoy underwater activities like snorkeling.
>> CORRECT
I\'m looking forward to seeing the beautiful sea but I am worried about my poor swimming skills.
>> CORRECT
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