Activity
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Have you tried flying a kite before?
Yes, I have tried flying a kite in elementary school.
My kite was looked like a ray. It had a bad balance. So it hovered again and again in the sky.
2. What activities in your school do you like the most and why?
I didn\'t have any activites in school. When I was in middle and high school, there was any
activity except studying. But I head the these days there are many kinds of avitvitis in school.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
Wow! Thank you for sharing this memorable experience of yours Ms.Alice! Have a great day! :)
~Lucy
Yes, I have tried flying a kite in elementary school.
>>CORRECT!
My kite was looked like a ray.
My kite was looked like a ray.
>>My kite looked like a ray.
It had a bad balance.
>>CORRECT!
So it hovered again and again in the sky.
>>CORRECT!I didn\'t have any activites in school.
>>CORRECT!
When I was in middle and high school, there was any activity except studying.
>> When I was in middle and high school, there weren\'t any activities except studying.
But I head the these days there are many kinds of avitvitis in school.
>>But I heard the these days there are many kinds of avitvities in school.
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