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Seven years ago, my husband and I arranged our second house for weekends in the countryside. There we have a small vegetable garden. Every year we plant some vegetables and crops. Since we had a vegetable garden, I have been interested in eco-friendly farming. We grow all the plants without any pesticides. I have studied on the sustainable farming with no pesticides and artificial fertilizer. I am always happy to grow and eat our organic vegetables.
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Hello, Gi [이름]!
That is truly amazing! It\'s very cool to eat foods you\'ve grown yourself!
Have a wonderful day and I\'ll see you tomorrow! :)
-T.Jhozel
Seven years ago, my husband and I arranged our second house for weekends in the countryside.
>> My husband and I set up our second home for weekend getaways in the countryside seven years ago.
There we have a small vegetable garden.
>> Correct!
Every year we plant some vegetables and crops.
>> Correct!
Since we had a vegetable garden, I have been interested in eco-friendly farming.
>> Correct!
We grow all the plants without any pesticides.
>> Correct
OR: We grow all of the plants without the use of pesticides.
OR: We grow all of the plants without the use of pesticides.
I have studied on the sustainable farming with no pesticides and artificial fertilizer.
>> Correct!
OR: I studied sustainable farming without the use of pesticides or artificial fertilizer.
OR: I studied sustainable farming without the use of pesticides or artificial fertilizer.
I am always happy to grow and eat our organic vegetables.
>> Correct!
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