activity of tourists
학생이 쓴 원문
Due to there is a bul-am mountain nearby my place,
tourists enjoy hiking and getting a good view of the
area in my place~ Is it correct??
강사 첨삭
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Here are my corrections for you:
Due to there is a bul-am mountain nearby my place,tourists enjoy hiking and getting a good view of thearea in my place~
>> Tourists enjoy hiking and taking some good views because there is a Bul-am mountain nearby my place.
>> OR: Bul-am mountain is just near our place, therefore tourists usually go there to enjoy hiking and taking some good views.
Is it correct??
>> Correct
>>OR: Is this sentence correct?
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