activity of tourists

2012-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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Due to there is a bul-am mountain nearby my place, tourists enjoy hiking and getting a good view of the area in my place~ Is it correct??

강사 첨삭

Hey there! I hope that I helped you out with your question. I\'m looking forward reading more compositions from you. I hope to see you again tomorrow. T. Louis ^__^ Here are my corrections for you: Due to there is a bul-am mountain nearby my place,tourists enjoy hiking and getting a good view of thearea in my place~ >> Tourists enjoy hiking and taking some good views because there is a Bul-am mountain nearby my place. >> OR: Bul-am mountain is just near our place, therefore tourists usually go there to enjoy hiking and taking some good views. Is it correct?? >> Correct >>OR: Is this sentence correct?  

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