Actually...
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강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thanks for posting your composition!
It\'s really useless to think about what you have done in the past.
What you do should is learn from them and move on with your life.
Don\'t dwell on things too much on them:)
~~T. Nina^^
When I am having my lesuire time,I think my past.
>>During my leisure time, I think about the past.
the most thing I thought is regarding some tests.
>>The thing that I always think of has something to do with some tests/challenges that I\'ve been through.
as for now, I have gotten many tests in my life,
>>Correct! [capitalization]
>>As for now, I have gotten many tests in my life.
but I have not satisfied with my score.
>>But I am not satisfied with my scores.
and then,
I am living with many regrets, such as dealing with my time.
>>Correct!
but I know the most useless time is regreting about past.
>>But I know that it\'s useless regretting about the past.
So I try to don\'t regret my doing.
>>So I try not to regret what I have done.^^
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