Actually
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it’s different about depending on the situations. especially when in the team, you should fallow the leader in the team with a loyalty. And leader also should respect to the someones in the team.
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I totally agree with your answer- loyalty is important especially when we are in a team. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> Actually, it\'s different depending on the situations.
especially when in the team, you should fallow the leader in the team with a loyalty.
>> Especially when you are in the team, you should follow the leader with loyalty.
And leader also should respect to the someones in the team.
>> And the leader should also respect the members of the team.
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