Actually I gave up becoming a teacher.

2011-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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I wanted to be a teacher when I studied in my college. Just a few years ago, Computer education was a very popular subject. Many seniors of my major are teaching at school now. but when I was a senior, it had gotten different. From some time, it's difficult to become a teacher. Teacher certification examination has no problem. Computer subject changed a selected subject, not a essential one. So Korea doesn't need many Computer teachers since then. The hole to be a teacher has been smaller and smaller than before. I had to think about what my job is. It reached that even if I weren't a teacher, I would want to work in shcool. So I'm interested in administration or officer in college.

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Hi [이름]! Nice of you to write for me today! Thanks for sharing your story behind your major. -Tiny^0^   I wanted to be a teacher when I studied in my college. >> I wanted to be a teacher when I studied in college. Just a few years ago, Computer education was a very popular subject. >> Just a few years ago, computer education was a very popular subject. Many seniors of my major are teaching at school now. >> Many of my seniors of the same major are teaching in schools now. but when I was a senior, it had gotten different. >> But when I was a senior, it had gotten different. From some time, it's difficult to become a teacher. >> For some time, it's difficult to become a teacher. Teacher certification examination has no problem. >>correctComputer subject changed a selected subject, not a essential one. >> Computer subject changed a selected subject to unessential one.So Korea doesn't need many Computer teachers since then. >>correct but don’t capitalize “computer >> So Korea doesn't need many computer teachers since then. The hole to be a teacher has been smaller and smaller than before. >> The needs for teachers has been lesser than before. (What do you mean by hole?) I had to think about what my job is. >>correctIt reached that even if I weren't a teacher, I would want to work in shcool.>> It even reached to a point where even if I weren't a teacher, I would still want to work in shcool.So I'm interested in administration or officer in college. >>correct^-^

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