Actually I gave up becoming a teacher.
학생이 쓴 원문
I wanted to be a teacher when I studied in my college.
Just a few years ago, Computer education was a very popular subject.
Many seniors of my major are teaching at school now.
but when I was a senior, it had gotten different.
From some time, it's difficult to become a teacher.
Teacher certification examination has no problem.
Computer subject changed a selected subject, not a essential one.
So Korea doesn't need many Computer teachers since then.
The hole to be a teacher has been smaller and smaller than before.
I had to think about what my job is.
It reached that even if I weren't a teacher, I would want to work in shcool.
So I'm interested in administration or officer in college.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Nice of you to write for me today!
Thanks for sharing your story behind your major.
-Tiny^0^
I wanted to be a teacher when I studied in my college.
>> I wanted to be a teacher when I studied in college.
Just a few years ago, Computer education was a very popular subject.
>> Just a few years ago, computer education was a very popular subject.
Many seniors of my major are teaching at school now.
>> Many of my seniors of the same major are teaching in schools now.
but when I was a senior, it had gotten different.
>> But when I was a senior, it had gotten different.
From some time, it's difficult to become a teacher.
>> For some time, it's difficult to become a teacher.
Teacher certification examination has no problem.
>>correctComputer subject changed a selected subject, not a essential one.
>> Computer subject changed a selected subject to unessential one.So Korea doesn't need many Computer teachers since then.
>>correct but don’t capitalize “computer
>> So Korea doesn't need many computer teachers since then.
The hole to be a teacher has been smaller and smaller than before.
>> The needs for teachers has been lesser than before. (What do you mean by hole?)
I had to think about what my job is.
>>correctIt reached that even if I weren't a teacher, I would want to work in shcool.>> It even reached to a point where even if I weren't a teacher, I would still want to work in shcool.So I'm interested in administration or officer in college.
>>correct^-^
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