acupuncture
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Today, I went to Ja-Woon Chinese acupuncture and herbal clinic.
I'm smaller than my age so I needed to be taller and also I my right foot hurts.
This is my 3rd time going to Chinese acupuncture and herbal clinic. At the first two times, I got acupuncture one my right foot and my two legs.
I will get acupunctured for 7 more times. From today, I get acupunctured only on my two legs and my head. Being acupunctured on my head seems creepy but, being acupunctured on my leg hurts more.
I hate the medicine which the Chinese acupuncture and herbal clinic gives me. Also, I have rhinitis so my medicine is even more bitter than others.
강사 첨삭
Hi Joey!
I hope the acupuncture sessions work for you. Let me know if you feel any improvements.
-RJ -
Today, I went to Ja-Woon Chinese acupuncture and herbal clinic.>>correct
I'm smaller than my age so I needed to be taller and also I my right foot hurts.
>>I'm smaller than my age so I want to be taller. Also my right foot hurts.
This is my 3rd time going to Chinese acupuncture and herbal clinic.
>>This is my 3rd time going to a Chinese acupuncture and herbal clinic.
At the first two times, I got acupuncture one my right foot and my two legs.
>>At the first two visits, I got acupuncture on my right foot and my two legs.
I will get acupunctured for 7 more times. From today, I get acupunctured only on my two legs and my head.
>>At the first two visits, I got acupuncture on my right foot and my two legs.
I will get acupunctured for 7 more times. From today, I get acupunctured only on my two legs and my head.
>>I will get acupuncture for 7 more times. From today, I get acupuncture only on my two legs and my head.
Being acupunctured on my head seems creepy but, being acupunctured on my leg hurts more.
>>Getting acupuncture on my head seems creepy but, getting acupuncture on my leg hurts more.
I hate the medicine which the Chinese acupuncture and herbal clinic gives me.
>>Getting acupuncture on my head seems creepy but, getting acupuncture on my leg hurts more.
I hate the medicine which the Chinese acupuncture and herbal clinic gives me.
>>correct
Also, I have rhinitis so my medicine is even more bitter than others.
>>correct
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