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학생이 쓴 원문
2. I think it\'s hard to change people discriminating. So I would tell them to think again if I witnessed any sign of discrimination. Because they may need someone who is gotten angry with on pulse.
3. I would answered the question of number 1.
have you ever experienced dialing the wrong number when you\'re calling.
Yes, I have. Then, I hung up the phone immediately, or after saying I\'m sorry. I also redialed to check whether someone I was looking for or not.
강사 첨삭
Hi James, thanks on adding more answers from the questions. Good job. -T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
>> 2. I think it\'s hard to change people from discriminating. I would tell them to think again if ever I will witness any signs of discrimination because they may need someone.. [who is gotten angry with on pulse ] ( I didn\'t understand what you meant here.)
have you ever experienced dialing the wrong number when you\'re calling.
>> 3. I will answer the question in number 1.
>> CORRECT
Then, I hung up the phone immediately, or after saying I\'m sorry.
>> I will hung up the phone immediately after saying sorry.
I also redialed to check whether someone I was looking for or not.
>> I will also redial to check whether it\'s the person I\'m looking for or not.
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