Adoption
학생이 쓴 원문
I think there are a few reason why people adopt children.
First reason is that people don’t have children, so they want to adopt children.
Second reason may be that they have great mercy and love.
I don\'t think that adoption is common in my country.
Of course, there are some people who adopt children, but it is not common.
강사 첨삭
I appreciate you doing your homework, [이름] Ha. It was a pleasure meeting you today in class. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the topic of adoption. I wonder if you have ever considered it? :) Have a good night. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I think there are a few reason why people adopt children.
>> I think there are a few reasons people adopt children.
First reason is that people don’t have children, so they want to adopt children.
>> The first reason is that people don’t have children, so they want to adopt children.
Second reason may be that they have great mercy and love.
>> The second reason may be that they have great mercy and love.
I don\'t think that adoption is common in my country.
>> I do not think that adoption is common in my country.
Of course, there are some people who adopt children, but it is not common.
>> CORRECT =)
I think there are a few reason why people adopt children.
>> I think there are a few reasons people adopt children.
First reason is that people don’t have children, so they want to adopt children.
>> The first reason is that people don’t have children, so they want to adopt children.
Second reason may be that they have great mercy and love.
>> The second reason may be that they have great mercy and love.
I don\'t think that adoption is common in my country.
>> I do not think that adoption is common in my country.
Of course, there are some people who adopt children, but it is not common.
>> CORRECT =)
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