Adoption
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your opinion about adoption? Is adopting widely accepted in your country? Why or why not?
I totally agree adpotion. I think that adoption is really good thing. but I don\'t have confidence that can I adopt.
In my country, adoption is not common and is not widely accepted. These days many people accept that adoption is good thing. but in old days only infertile parents adopted a baby and they kept a screte adotion. Korean people think that their own blool line is important. This is the reason.
* I have a question. My score is always 26~27. What can I do for improving my English?
강사 첨삭
Good day Ms. [Name]!
Oh I understand. Same in my country they think blood is thicker than water. Regarding your score, we do level up after two weeks to one month. :) Moreover, your skill has been improving and I\'m so happy for that. You are more confident using the language without any barriers. Keep it up Ms. [Name]! :)
~Lucy
I totally agree adpotion.
>>I totally agree adoption.
I think that adoption is really good thing.
>> I think that adoption is really a good thing.
but I don\'t have confidence that can I adopt.
>>CORRECT!
In my country, adoption is not common and is not widely accepted.
>>CORRECT!In my country, adoption is not common and is not widely accepted.
These days many people accept that adoption is good thing but in old days only infertile parents adopted a baby and they kept a secret adoption.
>>CORRECT!Korean people think that their own bloodline is important.
>>CORRECT!
This is the reason.
>>CORRECT!
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