Adoption

I listened today's coversation again. I found some mistakes. The music you heard was not music that I listened. It was cell phone connecting sound.*^^* Anyway let me tell you my opinion about adoption. I can see people who really wants to have a baby. Thesedays the number of people who can't have a baby is getting more and more. the reason might be environmental pollution. Adoption is needed for that kind of case. It's good for ont only them but also baby. Baby can be loved by adoptive parent and aboptive parent are able to have their baby. So It's good for both of them.But before deciding adoption, we must give deep thought about it. Because it influences baby's whole life. *^^*

Hello [이름]!!   You have an interesting answer here.. ^^ Adoption is the most common option for couples who can’t have their own baby because of natural causes such as sterility or old age. I agree with you when you said that it needs deep thought because it will affect not only the baby’s entire life but also the psychological condition of the parents.. Anyway, you did a great job and just check my corrections below… See ya!   T. Shy   I listened today's coversation again. I found some mistakes.>> I listened at today's conversation again. I found some mistakes. I can see people who really wants to have a baby.>> I can see people who really want to have a baby. (People is in plural form so use plural verb ‘want’ instead of ‘wants’) It's good for ont only them but also baby. >> It's good not only for them but also for the baby. Baby can be loved by adoptive parent and aboptive parent are able to have their baby. >> The baby can be loved by the adoptive parents and the adoptive parents can have their baby. So It's good for both of them >> So it's good for the both of them But before deciding adoption, we must give deep thought about it. Because it influences baby's whole life. *^^* >> But before deciding for adoption, we must give deep thought about it because it influences the baby's whole life. *^^*