Ads of my academy
학생이 쓴 원문
While running my academy, I have advertised my academy . First one the side of the building I installed big signs to catch passersbys\' eyes. And I have made ad flyers and let them delivered to each house with newspapers. Now I use Naver blog to promote my academy. Young parents are used to get information via social networking. But I am not good at updating the blog, it doesn\'t work much.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Gi [이름]!
Thank you once again for doing your homework. I totally agree with you. Nowadays, people rely on social media for information, but in the past, flyers, brochures, and tarpaulins were ways to promote one\'s business.
- T. Caitlyn
While running my academy, I have advertised my academy .
>> CORRECT
>> While running my academy, I have been advertising it.
First one the side of the building I installed big signs to catch passersbys\' eyes.
>>For the first one, I installed big signs on the side of the building to catch passersby\'s eyes.
And I have made ad flyers and let them delivered to each house with newspapers.
>> I have also created advertising flyers and had them delivered to each house along with newspapers.
Now I use Naver blog to promote my academy.
>> CORRECT
Young parents are used to get information via social networking.
>> Young parents are used to getting information via social networking.
But I am not good at updating the blog, it doesn\'t work much.
>> CORRECT
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