Advantage and disadvantage of video conferencing application
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The first advantage is that the time and space to attend the meeting is not restricted.
The second advantage is that more people can attend the meeting at a time.
The biggest downside is that we can\'t create the empathy between people.
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The first advantage is that the time and space to attend the meeting is not restricted.
>> The first advantage is that the time and space to attend a meeting is not restricted.
The second advantage is that more people can attend the meeting at a time.
The second advantage is that more people can attend the meeting at a time.
>> The second advantage is that more people can attend meetings at a time.
The biggest downside is that we can\'t create the empathy between people.
The biggest downside is that we can\'t create the empathy between people.
>> The biggest downside is that there is no opportunity for empathy among people.
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